Thursday, 18 October 2018

Explanation Writing

Learn: This week I have re-learn my understanding of the structure of an explanation writing

Thursday, 20 September 2018

My Jubilee Highlight

60th Jubilee St Pius X Catholic School
My Best Moment about the Jubilee
Trina’s Ta’uolunga  
On Sunday the 16th it was St Pius X Catholic 60th Jubilee.
As I walked up on the stage I was very frightened in front of all the people who were looking at me. People looking at me like an OWL with there eyes, I felt like I was gonna faint but I didn’t.

My best moment about the Jubilee was Trina’s Ta’uolunga when she walked up onto the stage she had a lot of oil on her body which made her glimmer and shine like a star. Her legs and arms were shaking , her heart was pounding very fast and her teeth were chattering.

When the music came on she started dancing everybody started cheering at her and applauding. People came and started dancing around her , they even threw money everywhere as if they didn’t care about the money.

Evidence of Maths

Learn:I am learning to understand rate and ratio 

1. 3 x ? = 180
I know that 3 x 6 = 18
So I multiple 6 from 10 which equal 60
So there for my answer is 60.

2. 4 x ? = 320
4 x 8 = 32
10 x 8 = 80
So my answer is 80.

3. 4 x ? = 280
4 x 7 = 28
10 x 7 = 70
So my answer is 70

4. 3 x ? = 36
3 x 12 = 36
36 / 12 = 3
So my answer is 12

5. 7 x ? = 140
7 x 2 = 14
10 x 2 = 20
So my answer is 20

6. 8 x ? = 640
8 x 8 = 64
10 x 8 = 80
So my answer is 80

7. 4 x ? = 160
4 x 4 = 16
10 x 4 = 40
So my answer is 40

Thursday, 6 September 2018

Girls Narrative Writing

Learn: I have been learning how to pre-assess my writing.

Once upon a time there was a group of children, they were exploring what happened inside the haunted house. It was night time, twelve in the morning they all grabbed their torches to look where they were going. But then, Aaliyah heard something coming behind her she turned back and then she tells everyone that she is going to see what is making the noise.

Aaliyah went into the dark by herself, she found where the noise was coming from and she said, “Is anyone here?” The noise kept on going and then she saw a shadow, she gasped and ran back to where her group was. Aaliyah got back safe, Annalisa asked, “Should we play a game?” Trina , Ailini , Claudia , Setaita and Joseph said “Yes”, but Aaliyah said “No.”

Aaliyah was too terrified of playing games in the dark, so Aaliyah didn’t play the game with them, because she thinks that something will happen during the game. So Trina said “Should we play the Ouija Board.” And everyone said “Yes.”
So Setaita grabbed the Ouija board out of her bag and placed it on a dirty floor.

They all placed their fingers on the eye patch and they asked the spirit questions, they said “What is your name.” And it spelled. “C H A R L I E.” “What do you want from us.” And Charlie said. “I WANT JOSEPH.” And then they ask “But why do you want Joseph.” Annalisa replied. Charlie said “BECAUSE , I SAID SO!” Charlie replied. Joseph started screaming as loud as he could and ran into a dark room, everyone followed him and they saw Joseph looking right at them , everyone said “Why are you looking at us like that with your big eyes?.”
Joseph said “ I am going to kill Aaliyah .“

He grabs Aaliyah and throws her to the big wall , the big whiteboard falls on her , then Joseph saw a big wood on the floor and whacked it on Aaliyah's head and Aaliyah died. Everyone looked at Aaliyah and they saw the blood coming down from her head. They all ran and found a safe place to hide from Joseph, Joseph was feeling a bit dizzy , he fell on the ground and he died. The other 5 ran outside and they checked the time , it was 3am in the morning.

“3AM IN THE MORNING.” They yelled, Claudia and Setaita started to get scared and they told everyone “Should we just go back home because, it is starting to get more scarer.” So Annalisa said “Should we play I dare you.” Some people said yes and some said no. They grabbed a bottle and they stood in a circle, they spinned the bottle around and it landed on Claudia. So Annalisa asked Claudia “Truth or Dare.” “Dare.” Claudia replied. Annalisa said “I dare you to say Bloody Mary are you here 3x”

Claudia said it 3x and nothing happened, but then Claudia felt something on her shoulder and she saw blood on her shoulder and Claudia ask them “Did you guys put fake blood on my shoulder to scare me?” They said “NO” Claudia got scared and she told them that she is going home by herself because she didn’t want anything else happening. When Claudia was walking home she had a feeling that someone was following her she looked to the back and saw… JOSEPH.
She was confused and frightened.

Joseph was following her back home so Claudia ran home she took the left turn and she saw Joseph right in front of her and Joseph smiled. He grabbed her head and squeezed until her head popped. Claudia is no longer a alive. Back to the 4 people who were still alive, they didn’t want to play I dare you. They got tired and went back home they saw a taxis and they told him to stop, so he stopped and let them in. The taxis driver kept on looking at them, Specially Setaita because he thought that Setaita did something wrong but she didn’t

So the taxi driver dropped them off back home and then the taxi driver grabbed Setaita and drove off with her. Setaita punch the taxi driver and they crushed into a tree, Setaita got off and ran back to Trina’s house and locked the doors. After all the deaths and games that they did they promise each other that they wouldn’t go back to the haunted house again.



Friday, 24 August 2018

Maths Fractions

Maths Fractions
Learn:Find a unit fractions of a set using addition facts particularly doubles.

This is what I have been learning in maths. So you can see I have been solving fractions during maths time. What I have learnt about factions is that the numerator shows how many of the parts indicated by the denominator are taken. The denominator is the number of parts that is shared into groups.

Thursday, 23 August 2018

Vocabulary Web

I am learning new vocabulary using vocabulary web
This week I have been learning to find new vocabulary from a text using a vocabulary web.
Here is a word that I was very curious to learn about

Religious Education

Learn: I am learning to describe the Early Christians communities stated in Acts 1: 43 - 47

Friday, 17 August 2018

100 Words Challenge

100 Words Challenge
Learn: I have learn how to improve my writing by writing the things I need help with.

My Current Level
Description of this level
Evidence of this level
Tried a strategy, but it didn’t quite work. I think I know what this narrative is about, but there is some confusion as to the main topic
I always know what I am doing but when it comes to writing I don’t know what it is about.
At least three time organised paragraphs that focused on the best events of the story
When I am writing paragraphs I always have 2 or more paragraphs that are the best writing.
We can follow what’s going on in the story. We could use more details to make it more interesting and help us understand the situation.
When I am writing a story and when I reading it, I think it doesn’t makes sense or I need more details to add in my story.
What is visual imagery? What is vivid language?
When someone is reading my story they ask me questions about my writing and I say “I don’t know.”
Only a one or two sentence conclusion

When I am writing I only have small conclusion.
Surface Features
Has so many grammar or spelling errors that the writing is difficult to follow.

I always put my grammar in the wrong place.

Early Christians (Lydia)

Learn:I am learning to describe the Early Christians communities stated in Acts 1: 43 - 47

Thursday, 9 August 2018

Character Study Diagram By Helena

Learn: I learn to study a character in the First Ride story. This is a narrative structure. Monica is the main character. 

Tuesday, 7 August 2018

Cooking With Helena

Cooking with Helena
Ham and Pasta salad
Today was so fun making ham and pasta salad. I have been waiting in my whole life to learn how to cook ham and pasta salad. The hardest part about cooking the ham and pasta salad is the pasta, I have to wait until the pasta is cooked and it was so boring to wait for the pasta to cook.
Step 1 - Boil the pasta until it's cook
Step 2 - Drain in cold water
Step 3 - Die Tomato, Ham
Step 4 - Add all, tomato,ham,pasta, and mayo
Step 5 - Serve on white bowl, take a photo before you eat
Step 6 - Clean up
Step 7 - Leave